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Thesis statement: Me And You and The Karate Kid are similar because they both tell a story that how someone changed or afftected a boy. And these affects made them to learn how to be more mature.

Outline:
First paragraph: telling what happened in Me and You. Trying to write detailed ( lorenzo’s problem and his relationship with his sister )so it can be easily compare with The Karate Kid.

Topic sentence:  Lorenzo’s sister and Lorenzo had their own fantastic experience in basement and they both learned something from each other.

Second paragraph: Analyse what sides did Lorenzo changed.

Topic sentence: Lorenzo changed more mature than before.

Third paragraph: describing The Karate Kid’s plot. He is a boy immigrate to China but bullied by others. For protecting himselves he began to learn Kung Fu.

Topic sentence: He grow up that he knew Kung Fu is not only about paunches but trying to master himself.

Fourth Paragraph: Analyse how did his Kung Fu teacher affect on him.

Topic Sentence: When ones knows how to master himself, it is the time he becames mature.

Fifth Paragraph: Compare these two charcater that what are similar what are different.

Topic sentence: Teenagers have to have someone to help them grow up.